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I have to say, you're really improving, though I think there is still room for improvement here.

The line art is really thick. It makes the drawing look a little too cartoon-ey. The hair could use more work. Next time, try to make some more strands. The eye seems a little off-putting, too... Like, it shouldn't be that wide open (It kind of gives her a rape-vibe, no offence. XD)

The anatomy is okay. The shoulder and arm bother me, though. The arm is way too far out, and the shoulder is way too high up. Maybe is she was turned slightly, then it would look better. You might want to work on the feet too. They have sort of a horsey-hoof kind of look going.

All in all, it does look good. Just work on that anatomy and line art, and you'll do great. :)

Keep up the good work lovey. ^_^
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BaconMagic Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Thank you, dear :heart: This is the first good critique I've ever had.
BisexualMarshMallow Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha, really? :heart:

It's no problem. I'm still working on my style too, so feel free to return the favor. :3
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